Gnomish

A story about a girl who becomes a Cutter. Please give me any tips, and the title is still in the works...

In which the girl goes to the City. Please comment any tips, I am still working on it...

In which she explores the city. Please give me any helpful tips, this is still a work in progress!

In which she has an interview with a Cutter. All tips and nits are welcome! (Title in works)

In which her family moves to the City. All tips are helpful, and title suggestions!

In which she starts her training. Sorry about the awkward place it leaves off... Anyways, all tips are helpful, including those about the title.

In which the girl gets to practice Cutting for the first time. Again, sorry for the awkward ending place.

In which she completes her training. Again, all hints and tips are welcome and appreciated!

In which she starts her first few days of being a Cutter.

In which she makes a plan. Sorry about the awkward place this leaves off.

This was previously called Cutting Story. In which she begins the trip to Brutehaven.

In which she continues on the Cartrain to Brutehaven.

In which she arrives in Brutehaven and finds a lead.

In which she talks with Jonathon Ledwell, she and Mel have a fight, and she spends her first day in Brutehaven.

In which she starts her journey back to the city. (Sorry this took so long!)

In which she talks to a couple ghosts, meets a friend of Mr. Ledwell's, and keeps going towards the city.

In which she finally meets Mel's father and the plan is revealed! Sorry this took so long to post by the way, I'll try to post the next chapter soon.

In which she finally goes into the Otherworld... And please note that as far as reviews go I'm looking for everything, including grammar and spelling.

In which she hears something she shouldn't, makes a new enemy, and follows Mel and Ledwell to Artona.

In which she talks to Mr. Sallon, and explains what happened. (There's a pretty long explanation scene, hope it isn't too slow.)

She goes to Mr. Teller's office and gets a bit of a fright! Some more action in this chapter but I'm not sure how I did.

She goes to the Otherworld again (kind of) and talks to the princess.