GlitterGabbi

There are two ways to paragraph your story, tabbing and entering. You can enter two times to make an empty line for the next paragraph.

Guys, I'll make a longer version of this after when the rest of the story is submitted! It'll be an even better version! Just wait!

WOW THANKS!!! Yea, I'll take your advice. Yea, I was writing this on my iPad and auto-correct is ANNOYING! xD

;_; What a sad story....... But it was very interesting! I wanted to keep on reading and reading ;_; I don't know why though...... The ending was also sad.... Unique ...

Wow, yay! Thanks! I didn't have much time to write the whole story down so I broke into parts. Sorry.

Well, I have already written the whole story, this is just the intro. I thought if I wrote down all of the story, it could've been long, so I broke ...

It's not whine, it's whinny, a horsey sound :3 (Whine -> whined. Whinny -> whinnied. See the difference?) "The horses mane was brown ......... ran down the field" I can ...

Like I said, this was project for school, I had to keep it as short as I can so..... Yea. Sorry for that. If I had more details, the story ...

This was meant to be a project for school. It was meant to be a short story but it turned out kinda long. I broke it into parts just 'coz ...

It's great so far! I enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for you to finish the rest of the story! I also agree with Hannah, but I hope you'll ...