Glimmerglass

Thanks for all your kind reviews!

Thanks so much for your review! I appreciate the advice, and will definitely take it into account when I go into another round of editing. I'm glad you enjoyed my ...

Edited! (somewhat...)

Yes, I agree about the capitals - MS Word did it automatically, so I have to go back on here and fix it - and also about the brackets. Thanks ...

Thanks for both of your reviews! I take all advice to heart. (: Appreciate your time, ~Glim

Thanks for your review! Yes, my first drafts tend to be long. And rambling. Hopefully this is what I will be fixing in my second draft, and thanks for the ...

No grammar mistakes; I like you :P Agrees with Vampyre. :)

Thanks for the review! I realized when I was writing this that the character of Meg wasn't developed very well. Unfortunately, I forgot about the deadline for the contest, and ...

Thanks for the review! I'd love to change those lines to include the articles, but my teacher specifically asked us to eliminate those, sooo...:( That long line is also bothering ...

Hi! Thanks for the review! I definitely agree with you about the Max-name-repeating, and that's something I can easily change. :) I also have to work on my showing-not-telling thing, ...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. --Glim

Hi! Thanks for the review. I see what you mean. This poem is still a first draft, and I have hopes for its potential. I have to do my usual ...

Hi! Thanks for your review! I'll keep in mind what you had to say. Since this is fanfiction, I'm not trying to give too many details about the character and ...

I agree that it's short. I wanted it to be longer, but the last line just didn't let me continue. Will probably add some more after I sleep on it. ...

Thanks for your reply! Jorie Graham is a published poet and won the Pulitzer in 1996 for her book “The Dream of the Unified Field.” I wrote a tribute poem ...