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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Horror Re: Lost Ones Chapter one (Adam)

    Wow I'm a big fan of zombie books!!! It's not to long and it has a great plot with lots of word variety it has a mysterious ending that keeps ...

    Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:28 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: 'Locked Up In Hell'(Title will be revised)-Prologue

    Wow you did a great job there was a strong introduction all though you often repeated the word children there was a pretty nice word variety but I think you ...

    Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:18 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Technology Re: Black and White [3]

    I agree with we're skin said it was a little long it doesn't exactly grasp your attention it holds it at the beginning it holds it and holds it but ...

    Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:59 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Sun and Shadow: Dakota's story chapter-1 beginning

    Hi violet butterfly!! I just joined to but I don't have the points to write any thing yet but that's why I'm reviewing!! I really love your story because its ...

    Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:50 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The anatomy of moving on

    This is really an awesome peace of work it's truly beautiful I love how you used a variety of words then it turns around and gets awkward in a way ...

    Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:43 pm


Remember: the plot is nothing more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.
— Ray Bradbury