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Re: Lost Ones Chapter one (Adam)
Wow I'm a big fan of zombie books!!! It's not to long and it has a great plot with lots of word variety it has a mysterious ending that keeps ...
Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:28 pm -
Re: 'Locked Up In Hell'(Title will be revised)-Prologue
Wow you did a great job there was a strong introduction all though you often repeated the word children there was a pretty nice word variety but I think you ...
Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:18 pm -
Re: Black and White [3]
I agree with we're skin said it was a little long it doesn't exactly grasp your attention it holds it at the beginning it holds it and holds it but ...
Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:59 pm -
Re: Sun and Shadow: Dakota's story chapter-1 beginning
Hi violet butterfly!! I just joined to but I don't have the points to write any thing yet but that's why I'm reviewing!! I really love your story because its ...
Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:50 pm -
Re: The anatomy of moving on
This is really an awesome peace of work it's truly beautiful I love how you used a variety of words then it turns around and gets awkward in a way ...
Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:43 pm
