GingerLizzy

Hm.. I really dont know what I think about this. One second I'm like, well this is just dreadful, but then the next I think; there is some good foundations ...

Hmm.. Not a bad opening paragraph. I like how you state the pupils to be "shuffling" around to different classrooms. I think the usage of the word "It" at the ...

Okay, marvel now upon my step by step review. Hooray! I liked the opening sentence a lot actually. You put a lot of fright in those few words, using that ...

Oof, this was rathet good actually, you had some really nice imagery in here Sarah. I like how you desribe the child's imagination; using the whole stray cat or dog ...

Anyone who isn;t a Stephen King fan must actually be crazy, I'm classed as a die-hard fan I believe; although I haven't read The Dark Tower series. Would it be ...

I actually quite liked this. It was short and simple, but put the point right across there. Although, the choice of the two 'criminals' at start really was a downer ...

I haven't read the book merely because the film didn't look all that good if I'm honest. I mean I know they say that the books are always better than ...

Okay, step by step review now. It's a lot easier; First & Second stanzas: I think in this you need a little more punctuation on the second line; 'cause the ...

Well, for one thing I don't really like the structure of this. It's the same for any type of writing for me; I hate it all blocked together and this ...

Hmm... I liked this in a way but in others I was like, oh no; this is not my cuppa tea. Right, so the concept was okay, although not majorly ...

Well, this is going to be a step by step review as I type while I'm reading, it works a lot better and people tend to understand it more. Hehe. ...

Oof, prepare for my step by step review here, so I'll review whilst reading through it, so as not to confuse you later. Hehe. The moonlight illuminates my heart, The ...

PennyPenguin my little garden gnome; I liked this, you have a nice concept to it but I don't take fair to the flow of it all, it's a little squew-iffy ...

I liked the concept of this piece - I think - although when it comes to portaying it I think there is room for nice improvements here and there. Such ...

Hm.. It's a nice idea here but I think you could've written it a little better. I'm actually quite a fan of your work, you vary from a lot of ...