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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: sweet slumber

    I love how you made such a meaningful poem out of something so simple. I have no corrections to make, and I'm pretty sure I'm the most critcy person you'll ...

    Feb 12, 2019

  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical
    Re: A Million Times and A Trillion More

    Katness, I think it's great that you're writing about the unconditional love of God. This is exactly what I need right now. It's funny how God brings it to you ...

    Feb 12, 2019

  • Short Story » Romantic, General
    Re: The Sacrifice of Beauty

    Hey, Mechasvi969, I think you did an overall great job on this story. Not to sound like a critic, but you did get a tad bit off course with your ...

    Feb 12, 2019

  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: The True Story of Cinderella

    I loved your twist!!! I think you did a great job conveying the evil queen's evilness. You also added some really cute jokes in there as well. "Once upon a ...

    Feb 12, 2019

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Being Female

    You did an AMAZING JOB!!!! Being a girl who's experienced the very tough issues you discussed, you conveyed my feelings perfectly. I think it was better without the stanzas, because ...

    Feb 12, 2019


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