Ghostly

Wow! This was pretty amazing, I felt very connected to the character and the story dragged me in and kept me, which is always a nice thing when you're the ...

Hi :) So first off, I really liked this. I think you did a really great job writing it, especially for it being your first short story. I'd suggest a ...

Hello! I'm here to review your story which I thought was really good and well written. I like your writing style a lot. That being said, it took me a ...