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Re: Eagle Talon Files chapter two
Yeah, I do think I can make the chapters longer but it would've gone over the character limit to add even the best part to this, I had to cut ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: A Dream Once Srouded
Ha, Ha, make that mistake so much its gotten somewhat funny, thank you for pointing it out.
Nov 29, 2011 -
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Wow this was good. I am a small person myself and this helps lift me out of my random depression. Though I noticed a few mistakes the poem was very ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: In Between Sheets
It was pretty dang good. You did discribe the setting, the character, the feel of the room. Great job! I can't wait to read the rest.
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Exposed Chapter 1
Keep it going this was really good I am exited to read more. I love action addventure stories and animals so this is a perfect combination and could easyily make ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: The Anarchy
Wow this is pretty good, i only spotted one small problem, you don't really have a clear time period. Other than that this is really good. Great Job!!
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: EDIT:Phantom of the Opera Poem
This is pretty good i write poems too and none of mine quite like this, for example, my poems always have a hidden meaning, but this is a flow of ...
Jul 22, 2011