Ghost42

Hahaha, you had mistakes in spelling, a small typo with confusing where with wore, I do that all the time don't worry, and I can't spell worth a crap so ...

Actually to make a reveiw, it has to actually point out at least one specific mistake, I think you can't hold me by that though because I dunno. Anyway, yes ...

Ok if this was made into one of the Assassin's Creed games, it'd be THE BEST out of all, though considering Revilations is Ezio's final chapter I highly doubt it ...

Considering I'm compleatly obssesed with Assassin's Creed, I can only say that I loved it. I spotted a few mistakes which where pointed out in previous responses such as the ...

I liked it alot. There was good description, I could almost see what Carter was seeing, though I'm half glad I couldn't literally feel what she did. As far as ...

I liked it, and personally one of my best books was supposed to be a stupid short story, but turned really long and amazing, maybe you could do the same ...

This poem has all the qualities of an amazing poem: raw emotion, a good word flow (though that could use a tiny bit of work), it captures the essecense of ...

I loved it. It had a fluent movement of syllables and rhyme. I can also make a connection to the poem, such as a dead relitive, freind, or pet that ...

I definitly liked it. The one thing I love about all of these parts is that they all have suspense and it seems as if the entire book is the ...

Ok this was really good. I only saw a few spelling, grammer, and punctuation mistakes. I loved the fight scean and how discriptive you were when the character was running ...

Wow! This is really good! I love fiction and action adventure books and this combines both perfectly. It also combines one of my favourte things that usually doesn't have much ...

These storys are very suspenseful and very good. I really can't wait till then next part! Keep writting and don't forget to proofread I saw a couple spelling mistakes for ...