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Re: No Manual
My day is like someone constantly rewinding a video. Every day is the same thing. Every day has the same schedule with no room for change. I walk past people, ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Sokatoah
Alrighty!I'm Gheala and I'll be reviewing this! Don't feel down with all the nitpicks. ********************************* -->The howling of vicious barks ((Barks don't howl. You might need to change th
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Post deleted
Lol. I liked it! It's amazing when you come to realize that you're beautiful the way you are, right? Your style is very nice, and I loved how you listed ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch (1)
Hellos!! Let's get this party started, because I so want to read this! *************** The countless days of rain felt like the entire world was being cleaned like a muddy ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch
I'm so so sorry for being too late here. :( A lot of people already reviewed. I had a lot of stuff to do and every time I get online, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 5 - Unwelcome Visitors
I'm so very sorry about the delay! I had a lot of things to do this week and little time for slacking. Now, I can't go near the slacking time, ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 4 - The Rythincolt
Hello there! I'm sorry for the delay, but like I told you, I'm a little busy these days. I'm feeling down and absolutely in lack of concentration, so I do ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 3 - Herley
Hello! I'm back and I'm excited! :D *************************************************** Bandages lay tenth-fold around his sore head. Okrol dared to open his eyes. These are two very short sentences b
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 2 - The Mountain Road
Alright! Gheala here! Let me tell you how I do this first. I don't review after I read, BUT I review while reading so I'd be able to write down ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: The Objective of The Game
Hey! It's Gheala. Remember me?? :P Before I read this, I want to say that I'm so excited! I made myself a cup of tea and hope your writings would ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1 - The Man in Fine Attire
Let me ask you one question, before you read this brief review. Are you joking? Do you seriously believe this piece needs to be reviewed? I loved it and I'm ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Untitled. (Plz review)
But Ill tell you about that later It should be: (I'll) and the mistake is repeated continuously throughout the piece. So Ill make this quick. Because I and have never ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: To The Shore
Hello, hello! I saw your avatar in the "New" posts and insisted on reading it! The first thing that crossed my mind after I finished reading was: I hope she ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Mirage (Chapt. 3)
MERCY. There had to be about 200 people working there, friends and neighbors included. Family, even. Lane’s dad. Both of my parents. Were they our parents after all? I think ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Wait, what?
I don't know if this is the right rating. This doesn't contain any serious gore, but it does mention death, so I thought I'd be careful. xD This is joint-written ...
Jan 19, 2011
