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Gheala

  • Short Story » General, General Re: No Manual

    My day is like someone constantly rewinding a video. Every day is the same thing. Every day has the same schedule with no room for change. I walk past people, ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Sokatoah

    Alrighty!I'm Gheala and I'll be reviewing this! Don't feel down with all the nitpicks. ********************************* -->The howling of vicious barks ((Barks don't howl. You might need to change th

    May 6, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Post deleted

    Lol. I liked it! It's amazing when you come to realize that you're beautiful the way you are, right? Your style is very nice, and I loved how you listed ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch (1)

    Hellos!! Let's get this party started, because I so want to read this! *************** The countless days of rain felt like the entire world was being cleaned like a muddy ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch

    I'm so so sorry for being too late here. :( A lot of people already reviewed. I had a lot of stuff to do and every time I get online, ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 5 - Unwelcome Visitors

    I'm so very sorry about the delay! I had a lot of things to do this week and little time for slacking. Now, I can't go near the slacking time, ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 4 - The Rythincolt

    Hello there! I'm sorry for the delay, but like I told you, I'm a little busy these days. I'm feeling down and absolutely in lack of concentration, so I do ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 3 - Herley

    Hello! I'm back and I'm excited! :D *************************************************** Bandages lay tenth-fold around his sore head. Okrol dared to open his eyes. These are two very short sentences b

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 2 - The Mountain Road

    Alright! Gheala here! Let me tell you how I do this first. I don't review after I read, BUT I review while reading so I'd be able to write down ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Objective of The Game

    Hey! It's Gheala. Remember me?? :P Before I read this, I want to say that I'm so excited! I made myself a cup of tea and hope your writings would ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chapter 1 - The Man in Fine Attire

    Let me ask you one question, before you read this brief review. Are you joking? Do you seriously believe this piece needs to be reviewed? I loved it and I'm ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Untitled. (Plz review)

    But Ill tell you about that later It should be: (I'll) and the mistake is repeated continuously throughout the piece. So Ill make this quick. Because I and have never ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: To The Shore

    Hello, hello! I saw your avatar in the "New" posts and insisted on reading it! The first thing that crossed my mind after I finished reading was: I hope she ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Mirage (Chapt. 3)

    MERCY. There had to be about 200 people working there, friends and neighbors included. Family, even. Lane’s dad. Both of my parents. Were they our parents after all? I think ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Wait, what?

    I don't know if this is the right rating. This doesn't contain any serious gore, but it does mention death, so I thought I'd be careful. xD This is joint-written ...

    Jan 19, 2011


I always prefer to believe the best of everybody; it saves so much trouble.
— Rudyard Kipling