GeorgiaMasonIII

Well, I loved this. I especially love the level of detail here; it's very vivid, almost difficult to read (in a good way). The only critique I have is that ...

I, um. Hmm. Well, at first glance, I can't think of any constructive criticism because I would advise you not to change a thing. No, seriously, this piece does something ...

First of all, I'm sorry about posting this twice; I am new to this site and didn't know that replies to reviews don't count as reviews. Second of all, I ...