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HT, I keep trying to separate the stanzas but for some reason it isn't letting me do so...

Malachi, Thank you so much for reading man! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece and got the message! Cheers! Graham

ALittleFallofRain, Thank you very much for the feed back! I'm very glad this poem had that effect on you. I am quite the dreamer and spend most of my time ...

Hey there HT, in the word document that this is originally written in, it is broken up into three stanzas, I'm not quite sure why they aren't in this published ...

Well, This was just amazing. You hit all three of my soft spots in one piece: Poetry, Music, and Les Miserables. I don't have anything else to say besides you ...

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing again Liaya! IF i had to pick a favorite line from this piece it would be " A loyal friend seeking laughter ...

Thank you very much for reading! Usually I would agree with you about the stanzas but with such a short poem I didn't think it was necessary, but as always ...

Hi Panda, Thank you for reading and I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Just to save you the trouble, sporadically means like randomly. Once again thanks for reading and for ...

Lyricalrebel, Thank you very much for reading!From your response it really seems as though you got the whole picture from the poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it. As to more ...

Hey There! First off these are absolutely beautiful. I, as someone who loves poetry, am really intrigued by the idea of starting off your novel with a stanza, it definitely ...

Thank you very much Liaya, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

the Royal court is symbolic of what is going on in the man's dream. I used a royal court as the symbol since normally one would be full of jest ...

Thank you very much Storm! The punctuation inputs were very helpful since I honestly never really know what exactly to do with it, but your commentary is very helpful not ...

Thank you very much! I was a little unsure about posting in here, but I now realized it will hopefully be beneficial!