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Thank you Deanie! ^_^ Just to clarify Hannah's power, you're completely right, but it's localized to the palms of her hands. She dragged Poppy by hugging on of he legs ...

^_^ Thank you so much! But I think you read into it a bit much with Alice's feelings of blame, because she actually is responsible.

You got poppy and Hannah mixed up again. XD

Okay this isn't really a review, more a comment. I think that this is a strong opening chapter, with just one tiny flaw- some of the phrases are very cliché, ...

Yeah, that would be best. ^_^

Thank you so much Dream! This is so helpful! (I get lazy towards the ends of chapters, but since it's coming through I'll have to work harder!). That link is ...

Thank you so much Dream! This is so helpful! (I get lazy towards the ends of chapters, but since it's coming through I'll have to work harder!). That link is ...

Thank you so much Deanie! Extremely helpful as always! I did change the ages, but I thought I told everyone. Hmm must have not. >.> At the moment, Hannah is ...

Thank you so much Deanie! Extremely helpful as always! I did change the ages, but I thought I told everyone. Hmm must have not. >.> At the moment, Hannah is ...

Thank you so much lost! ^_^ ALL your questions will be answered in the next chapter! ;)

Thank you so much lost! ^_^ ALL your questions will be answered in the next chapter! ;)

Gotcha! ^_^ thanks again!

Thank you, Magpie! ^_^ I'm happy you enjoyed the poem! That festival seems interesting! :O I think I'll read up on it later! The fish hooks thing is a metaphor ...

Thank you sooo much Hannah! ^_^ This is such a helpful review! The social situation I'm talking about isn't that specific. It's about people who are raised with certain beliefs ...

Formatting on yws is pretty hard, amirite? A good way to post your poem and keep the formatting is to write it in MS word, or what have you, then ...