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Hey Windsailor! Nice essay I found no spelling or grammar mistakes, but to be honest I didn't really look. I'm more focused on the format and sourcing of your essay! ...

Here to review part two! :) I'm not going to point out errors this time. You should already know that you have some spelling, grammar and tense issues. In this ...

Hey! I'm Hightop and I'm going to review! Firstly, I'm going to do a spelling and grammar sweep, where I'll point out mistakes. It was the last day in my ...

Hey, sorry for the late reply, but I'm here to review! First off, correct me if I'm wrong, but I thing you may have messed up with the font. I'm ...

Sorry for the late reply, but I'm here as requested! This was sort of funny, but unfortunately it wasn't my sort of humor, which is not a bad thing. We ...

Look who's getting an extremely quick response! Okay, first things I didn't like: To watch time fly, leaving a smokey trace This line doesn't flow as well as the others. ...

I'm alive! I'm here! Let's get this review started, shall we? This is quite an interesting story! There are so many routes this could go down, I really want to ...

Review time! Okay, first thing I want to bring up is the title. It's in caps. I don't think this fist in with the poem. It's sort of like you're ...

Happy review day! Nice and short! I'm guessing it's for the short poetry contest. It's hard to review something so short, but i'll give it a go! The night is ...

A MILLION APOLOGIES! I'm so sorry that I'm so late in answering your request! Anyway Happy Review Day! Let's get to it! if there are presumably children next door, That ...

Hey! I'm here as requested! Since this is a contest entry, I'll try and be as through as possible. :) Nit-Picks Just some small things. Bever wanted ‘a punch [/b] ...

Here as requested. Let's get started! First impressions To be perfectly honest, the beginning bored me. When I say the beginning I mean the first three paragraphs. Your opening paragraph, ...

Hey! Hightop here for a review! I think one thing I can help you with here is wording and sentences. I'm going to pick out the ones that seemed off ...

Hey Strange! Here as requested! and illiterate cousin. Small spelling error. You used a lot of full stops. All your sentences we short and snappy. The best thing to do, ...

Yoo! Herd you wanted some poetry reviews. ;) Okay, so you said this was a little choppy. That's because of the short snappy lines. Full sentences flow because they follow ...