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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Faux Pas

    Hi, I liked your poem, the subject and your narration. To be picky, i felt that your poem had very little flow. I found it hard to move from line ...

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: it's only sorry for a little while

    Wow. Hatred city, Population: you. I found this very intense, and read it about four or five times before even attempting to review it. I found it kind of confusing, ...

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Two Halves

    Hi, I liked your poem a lot, it had a sort of 'forbidden fruit' thing going on, which, as a curious reader, makes me wonder why the two people con't ...

    Jul 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter One

    Okay, this is my first review, so please don't judge me xD My favorite thing about your story, is the protagonist. A strong, sultry, confident woman, but yet still obedient ...

    Jul 8, 2013


sometimes i'm like "I should say something quotable to make it into the quote gen" but then I feel bad because quote gen quotes are very spontaneous
— theromanticchemist