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Re: Faux Pas
Hi, I liked your poem, the subject and your narration. To be picky, i felt that your poem had very little flow. I found it hard to move from line ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: it's only sorry for a little while
Wow. Hatred city, Population: you. I found this very intense, and read it about four or five times before even attempting to review it. I found it kind of confusing, ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: Two Halves
Hi, I liked your poem a lot, it had a sort of 'forbidden fruit' thing going on, which, as a curious reader, makes me wonder why the two people con't ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter One
Okay, this is my first review, so please don't judge me xD My favorite thing about your story, is the protagonist. A strong, sultry, confident woman, but yet still obedient ...
Jul 8, 2013
