Gamergirl

Hello, I'm just going to review this quickly from what I've read so far. As many people have said you over explained things. It took a while to get to ...

Hello I'll be review this so far. Today's The First Day Of School . I Groaned and Go Out Of Bed . I Peeled My Clothes Off and Put On ...

I am going to just jump right in and get straight to the point :D Yay! I'm glad to see your wrote this chapter up so fast. Ashton: Micah: The ...

I'm going to be honest and say that this didn't make a lot of sense to myself. However I may just be stupid. :D This piece is well written, however ...

Hello and I'll be review your story today :) I'm just gonna jump right in. Drew was a hottie a year older than me. I think it would be best ...

Firstly I love they way you opend with a question, really nice way to grab the reader. Everyone has a crush right? However I think there should of been a ...

An other greatly done chapter. Your wording is just as great here and I feel extremely sorry for poor Maria and everything she has been through. You make the readers ...

I feel so much sympathy for Maria. The way you have explained the sorrow she feels and the way she tries so hard to convince herself that it isn't true. ...

Very nice and I have to agree with the other reviewer, commas would of been better. This seemed somewhat rushed and a little over thought out. But it was nice ...

Never read the book myself but I did watch the movie *shot* (I didn't even know it was based off a book *shot again*). However seeing your review has made ...

I agree, this would have been great if it was expanded into a story. A lot of questions here. Like whom is speaking? Why is she/he so close to Death? ...