Galerius

Hi Helpful McHelpfulpants, This is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen, besides myself. Hope that helped, Galerius

I shall be following this most eagerly.

Hi Kylan, Hey, the first line actually has five syllables this time around. Nice. Hope that helped, Galerius

boobaah

Don't bump threads more than two months old, especially when you have nothing more to say than "I like this". And unlike Prokaryote's thread, I can actually close this one, ...

Fine, here's your critique.

Rule of thumb: Don't bump up works that are more than two months old - and especially not if the only comment you have is "This is great".

... Navita, stop reviewing, start looking at dates that pieces were posted, and then thank me for saving you from more embarrassment.

Well played, sir.

A reminder for me to review this today.

Hi ohsorocknroll, Delete this immediately, and don't post an old, useless poem again. Nobody likes to waste their time on something which the author has admitted he will never revise ...

Hold on there, cowboy. I still haven't even managed to get to your first one yet...

Kekeke, I shall critique this. Watch this space.

And another great YWS controversy thus died.

The poem was titled "lenin, lenin", two out of the three parts seemingly concentrate fully on peasant suffering and rebellion, the remaining part is devoted to the relationship between Rasputin ...