Galatea

Ieatworms, you are my new favorite person!

Incan, dictionary definitions aren't what I'm looking for--otherwise I wouldn't have asked. Besides, I found your definitions rather convoluted. Erethror, that's what people said about Ginsberg, not t

What gives something artistic merrit? What makes something art? What makes poetry poetry? Why?

Somewhat biased? If you know me at all, you know I'm brutally honest when it comes to these things. Would I put it in an anthology? No. Of course not. ...

I think its a pretty interesting commentary on how we talk to one another in American society. Its FUNNY. Espeically that last bit. You people take yourselfs too seriously. You ...

Love it!

'bickered and bayed' wants to be 'bickered and brayed '. it makes more sense gramatically, but poems like this don't really need to make sense, now do they? I like ...

Read Valerie Solanas' SCUM Manifesto . It's...special. But along those same lines.

Half the 'good' of any slam piece is the reading. Lots of shouting and anger and passion. I needed to get this on paper and out of my mouth, even ...

To be honest, I haven't heard of any of those texts. Every single person here needs to read Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card. Its the most amazing book ever.

Snoink--the change in meter is intentional, to mirror the 'jarring' change that's taking place within Eve Jenna--thanks for the compliment. You'll will soon learn that I'm hardly a Christian, and ...

Aww, ar, I'm flattered!! I really like the beginning, snoink. I tried and tried to start it, but it didn't want to begin anywhere but there.

He cried. Definitly. I talked to him on the phone, 'cause I'm away at school, and he absolutely loved it.

Punctuation is your friend. () . , ? " " etc. etc. etc. Spell check too. Use that. Please, for the love of all that is holy.

I can't hear it in my head, therefore I also cannot understand it. However, I'll read it aloud a few times and do my best to decifer it.