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Liberal AND facist? How does THAT work?

Brilliant. Just...brilliant. I love this.

I like Ode D'Morte, personaly. But for something less...obvious, perhaps simply call it the name of the place you are speaking of (I'm assuming Israel.) Something to the effect of ...

De Harain makes me think of D'Hara, from Terry Goodkind's work. Be careful with the choice of land name.

Creepy. Have you read the short story "Welcome to the Monkey House" by Kurt Vonnegut? If not, you need to. You'll get a better review after I print it and ...

It is spelled "excerpt", not "excert". Overall, it's okay. Not terribly remarkable. My largest concern (if I were you) would be developing sympathy for the boy. Right now, as a ...

Featured poem?! *blushes* Skye, I modified that metaphor at the end. I think it fits better now. You were right, it's a little too floaty for the frankness of the ...

I changed the end a little bit. Does that help, Misty? I was never satisfied with it myself.

I know this pain. Very well. Churned my stomache. Keep writing. Good luck.

weird. dont like it though. I like how each little idea is a part. My favorites are the first and last ones. My mind goes with Bobo and Mr.Wallace. For ...

You decide.

I went ahead and moved it. Not because I wanted too, but because I'd rather see this PRODUCTIVE CONVERSATION ABOUT POETRY continue, rather than get locked because of an arbitrary ...

I wasn't asking you, Incan, I was asking Erethror. I want his opinion, NOT yours. We've had plenty of it. I can't argue with you and you know it, so ...

First, less old english. This is the 21st century. Secondly, what is 'proper poetry' exactly anyway?

Art is art because someone, somewhere decides to call it art. Its that simple.