Gadi.

Should I seriously write more satires? Because satires were always hard for me to create, but that one came really easily...and I never thought I was good with yeah... Another ...

Excellent! I think you are describing a dancing scene, right? "Skip the change and close the frame" was the only line that I was really confused about. What does it ...

Maybe you should put a spoiler mark before you give the ending and the climax and all that,,,,and the important parts, I mean.

That was pretty good. Wasn't the usual lyrics you would expect, because this one almost read as a poem. Add just a bit more rhythm by making inner rhymes and ...

Wow! I liked it! It was really intriguing, though I had to read it a second time in order to really understand it. It really gave off the feeling of ...

Excellent! I liked this one much more! The only trouble I have is that the last sentence seems sort of... not cliche, but amateaur. "I had already thrown the wedding ...

Thank you all for your critiques and comments! I appreciate your honesty and I will make sure to revise it accordingly!

I liked it! Send it somewhere! I particularly liked the last line. It made me think of horizon. But maybe after "glow" you should take away the period to let ...

I liked the rhymes! I liked the story! what I didn't like was your lack of poetic devices, such as alliteration, imagery, etcetra.

It was very good, but too cliched. Where are the imagery? Where is the lyrical benefit? All I read was the too often used "I love you" that resonates in ...