Gadi.

Fascinated by what will happen next. Of course, the first part is always the hardest because we don't see the reasoning behind the actions. But maybe delve into the character ...

COOL! i loved it. It was really dramatic in the end, so sudden, and I mean I expected it, but not in that way! Some things: It was confusing because ...

I liked how both lines were a punchline at love. This punchline at love is from your own experience, and that makes it so much better! Snowed is an excellent ...

That was good! It certainly kept me there to the last part. I liked the way you mentioned that you were all alone, and that the people around you were ...

Nice! The character really did develop there, and we understood the story as it rolled along. Here is my most major criticism/critique of your story: The reader cannot just start ...

Nice Sonnet! It really kept me up to the last beat, because Soneets always have a nice little method of surprising the reader. The story itself was incredibly entertaining, and ...