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Re: White Oleander
I hated that book. Okay, no, I simply disliked it--I read it all in five days, but it was just so depressing and lonesome that I found it just a ...
Aug 26, 2007 -
Re: Go Ask Alice
I read it. It wasn't really fitting to be a classic, but I think it has evolved into one. I liked it a lot, though it's not really one of ...
Aug 26, 2007 -
Re: YWS Classics Debate
I read five, though there were at least ten where I started or got halfway through and got so frustrated with them I just threw them at somebody. But there's ...
Aug 26, 2007 -
Re: Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time
I read it and I loved it. It was amazing, moving, bizarre, and really gave me an insight into another world. I really liked how in the middle of a ...
Aug 26, 2007 -
Re: Speak
I read it too. I don't remember much of it, but it kind of showed the emo side but really connecting us with the girl. It was really weird, the ...
Aug 26, 2007 -
Re: My Sister's Keeper
I read My Sister's Keeper. It wasn't a classic or anything, I mean there was nothing precisely amazingly literary about it, but the philosophical idea was really what hit the ...
Aug 26, 2007 -
Re: Tired
Here are three things that make poetry good: 1) Meaning. Every poem needs to have a meaning, and it can be any, from how intolerance is wrong to blue flamingos ...
Aug 25, 2007 -
Re: Ode to a rainy Scene (edited)
WOWOWOW! I liked it! Two suggestions: But every society has its day, I suppose. Do you really need the "I suppose" in there? Or maybe you should say But every ...
Aug 24, 2007 -
Re: Mosques & Synagogues
I liked it! Suggestions: I am a Jew, and in synagogue we don't bend our knees. :) I liked all the parts. Especially this one: They needed land, a Zionist ...
Aug 24, 2007 -
Re: My Wonderful Weekend
Nice! Here is the main thought (sort of philosophical really) that ran through my head while readin your story the second time: Every idea. no matter how bad it is, ...
Aug 24, 2007 -
Re: Unknown Story Chap. 12 part 3
wow! Nice! I liked it! Of course, it was just a tad hard to understand what was happening, not reading the first parts of the story, but I felt compelled ...
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: "my Bitty"
(Capitals means I have put it there--look at the new organization of the poem too) When I look into your eyes, all my troubles fly {NOT TOO ORIGINAL--SAY FLUTTER OR ...
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: Toss-Up
Wow! You are brilliant! This seems quite proffessional, and some parts were so simple, yet complicated, that I had to reread them out loud. Incredibly well-done! Somehow, however, the line ...
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: I could talk to you forever
Nice! I liked it! I have a few suggestions. "she looked like Bonnie Wright, Ginny from the Harry Potter movies, of course he didn't dare tell her that." I really ...
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: Of Mice and Men
Good job! First, "Unless you’re tyring to loose weight" should be "Unless you are trying to lose weight". I think you should delete this sentence--it sort of confused me, and ...
Aug 23, 2007
