Gabriel15

Hey, like you've been told by other reviewers, the 2:1 ratio. Also, I only read the first chapter, like other people noted, people in general are lazy; when they see ...

Ok, this was a good piece and I enjoyed reading it. So far, we know very little of the world, character(s), or the plot. It has a bit of mystery ...

All in all, it was a decent piece of writing with potential for a great story. We had no idea who any of the characters were or where they were. ...