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Re: Hanging from a Noose
Okay, first of all, wow. This is one of the first stories on here to make me literally shiver. It was an amazing read. It was deep, creepy, intense, and ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Once it see's you....
Wow. This is extremely creepy. In fact, you gave me shivers beyond belief. I loved the poem overall. I thought that your story line was very impressive, the idea of ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: my rap for Erin
Well, that was very interesting. I don't think that this is really a rap. If you were being serious about it being a rap, or a poem of any sort, ...
Jan 4, 2015 -
Re: Lost
I like what you did with this poem. It was very creative. One thing that I really liked about it was the set up, and the fact that you did ...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: Grenade
First off, I love this poem. I think that the strongest point was your last stanza. I only have a few kind of picky suggestions. 1.) I think that it ...
Jan 2, 2015