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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Amoung the hidden- Margret Pettersen Haddix

    These were my favorite books in the 6th grade! I was sucked in. She continues to be one of my favorite authors. I'm glad others are enjoying those books as ...

    Aug 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fruit

    Don't make it too clear though. Make it just enough that we can figure it out with one read. Because it's amazing right now, just slightly hazy.

    Jun 20, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An Eighth of an Inch

    Thank you all. Gryphon, these were the things I wanted people to critique me on. That's why I said it was rough, because some of those (but not all) same ...

    Jun 18, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: magic Kisses

    This just makes me sick...what a dreadful ending...

    Jun 17, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Patriot

    Thank you all very much. I'll definitely do some changes according to your comments, scasha. Those were very helpful comments indeed.

    Jun 3, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Keepers of The Peace

    I have to agree with GryphonFledgling... I'll read it once you fix it up.

    May 27, 2008


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