Fullmetal13

haha wrote this in two in the morning. it was copy and pasted so the stanzas were removed for some reasons but thanks for the input

selfish? idk i guess you could call it that but i don't ask people to critique my stuff and i don't critique. it's that simple. all i want is people ...

lol nice work sweet thang

wow...this is is beautiful. the images are just amazing. i love the innocence behind it and it really reminds me of how people feel when they're young the whole 'i'm ...

nnoooh nnoooh i write what i want where i want so yeah....buy me more lemon pledge

nnooohhh nnoooh i keep it on general asrticles.

this is good

it's supposed to be a blog. i publish it as an article so it gets up on the wall hence getting more traphic

I love how the actual teenagers who comment on this are the ones who agree you know the people that this site's aimed at. YOUNG writers. i knew i'd have ...

quick and simple. it's not really so much of the flow of this that i like because i don't think it flows but it seems more that it's not meant ...

i really like that it doesn't fully rhyme. It shows creativity and ingenuity on your part to make it flow like that without making it rhyme. I like the last ...

jas...i love you right now...i love that you're comment is the only one that hasn't totally made me rage and rant

thanks for proving my point snoink

I love that this created traphic on here. I enjoyed reading the comments. I just wanna say i don't leave cuz it was hard as hell finding this ((yes i ...