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Re: Who She Became
This is a rather heartbreaking poem, definitely a hard one to get through. But get through I did, and enjoy it as a piece of poetry I did. This was ...
Nov 28, 2023 -
Re: Dragged Through The Inferno
Hello, just going to leave my general thoughts! You didn't have a lot of text to work with given the brevity of this story, but you made it work regardless. ...
Nov 25, 2023 -
Re: 2 Minutes 2 Late (Part 1)
Firstly, nice title! Secondly, hello! I'm not the best at this "reviewing" thing, but I shall make an attempt regardless. Thirdly, I got a legitimate sense of dread. Something about ...
Nov 25, 2023 -
Re: You only fail when you stop trying
Sometimes the most simple of concepts can have the most brilliant of executions. That's the case here, and I think the reason why is the sheer relatability we can all ...
Nov 23, 2023 -
Re: Miles Degrassi’s story-Circus of horrors
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! It is time for the gruesome S’more… Top Graham Cracker - A good old origin story, a concept a ...
Nov 23, 2023 -
Re: Samuel Abbett’s origin: The Playground
Oi! Looks like I'm gonna hit you with the uno reverse card this time! Without further ado... --- Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! It ...
Nov 21, 2023 -
Re: Eternal Life, Ancient Greece, and Other Mundane Things
I think that writing about the ways we as Humans never change in some ways is a brilliant subject. To me, it's a very grounding experience. It can be comforting, ...
Nov 18, 2023 -
Re: The Fleshfull Machine (WIP Novel)
Hello! Stopping by for a review, please bare with me, I'm still new to this. Okay, so to address the elephant in the room, the prose! It, to me, is ...
Nov 15, 2023 -
Re: The perfect boy
So, this was really good at drawing intrigue. Like, exceptionally good. From the beginning, we have questions we want answered. Who is this guy? Who is this girl, and why ...
Nov 14, 2023