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Re: Somewhere
Wow and I don't say that alot. For one the poem is just beautifully written. Its so vivd and descriptive that I felt like I was there when I was ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Show Them Who's Boss
Great short story I have to say that i thought that it was very well written and flowed very well it was also it cronogical order and was very organized ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Materialistic
Wow I have to admit the lyrics are very good not only does it sound great if you tried to sing it because it rhymes, but also because it is ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Patterns And Colors
I thought how you constructed the poem was cool I've never seen one structured like that. I also like the simplicity of it .The only thing that i thought was ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Trapped
Hey, I have to admit the story was both great and haunting. Your a really good writer. I like how there is an air of mystery as to what kind ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Demon
Hey, Your right the poem is kinda dark but not in a bad way it was interresting to read. Also the demon you described sounded like a combination of a ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Monsters of the Mountain
Hey, I thought that the story was a little borring and didn't really hold my interest but the idea itself for the story with spirt collectors is pretty cool. I ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Ghosts
I thought that the storyline was pretty good it was humorous, flowed greatly, and had a mysterious/suspenceful air to it. I loved the two girls and their constant chattering and ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Cycle
Hey, I thought the poem was very well written and the lines were extrodinaraly good. I like how you describe the stages of a relationship from how it begins and ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hey, I'm not an expert on songs but i can honestly say that this one is pretty good. The central topic of the song is control and being controled and ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Watermelon
Love the poem, besides watermelon being one of my favorite fruits, the poem was well written very descriptive, and most of all made me want to have a watermelon. The ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Falling Skies
Hey, Must say it was a very insperational and vivid depiction of what it would be like to fly and the freedom of it. I liked how you described the ...
Aug 8, 2011
