Froggy

hi, i'm not much of a poetry person, but I'm here to make a review. I like it. I think it has potential to be a really good song, but ...

yeah, I intend to do more with Evelyn, but I haven't fleshed out her character yet, however, the next chapter there will be a lot of interaction with her and ...

thank you for your review and feedback! all of this was incredibly helpful. to answer your last question about if the last line was actually a quote or just made ...

Thank you, these edits are really good, and I can definitely see how that would make it flow better without losing my own personal rhetoric. I will definitely use some ...

oh, and I wanted to say, I can remember being taught about all the specific parts of the cell in my freshman year biology class, but maybe the curriculum was ...

thanks for the feedback

so, I know this says short story, but I plan on posting it as a novel along with chapter two, so bear with me until I decide to have the ...

this seems like it has the potential to be a very good story. however, your grammar is pretty atrocious. maybe i'm just a stickler for that kind of stuff, but ...