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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ship Off Part 1: The Ship

    Thanks for the feedback. I certainly don't hate you but I'm grateful for your critique. I'm always looking for people's honest opinions. Sometimes I guess I don't thoroughly look over ...

    Apr 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: At The End Of The Storm There Is Always Light

    Hi There, Don't know if you meant this word to be as so but on the 3rd stanza, 2nd line, you might have wanted to say "we're or we were". ...

    Apr 9, 2013
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Lyrical Re: As the Ashes Blow

    I'm a real freak when it comes to music. And to be honest, this song was just pure AMAZING. Might have been some spelling errors that people have pointed out ...

    Nov 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Reign Of Fame

    Thanks a lot, I'll be sure to make the changes!!

    Nov 17, 2012


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— Louisa May Alcott