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Re: Teacher
I think it's really long and u use the word Teacher alot and after the first line that say about teacher said to student that should be enough, you should ...
Jul 24, 2007 -
Re: Imagine
I agree with AceAnriertenz, it does give the impression of one's conciousness but i feel like there are too many pauses in your poem and I kinda feel like I ...
Jul 24, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
[spoiler]Yeah, but no one could really be Lily! POOR SNAPE I LOVE YOU!!![/spoiler] I don't get it; why does practically no one love Snape? He's awesome! Sooo much better than ...
Jul 23, 2007