Francis

Yes, it has. I feel so relieved now, thank you for your answer. I feel the same about "writing about anything and everything", because it broadens our views and pushes ...

I think I understand what you are asking. She is not a spiritual being, she is simply a woman, and we are together, as I can touch her and kiss ...

Thank you for your review. It excites me to read so different views of the matter at hand. It always reminds me that we all can make our opinions only ...

Thank you for your advice. I felt like something wasn't right while writing it, but since the rule in my language is to capitalize the starting word of every line, ...

Thank you very much. I get what you think about that exclamation point and I agree. And I'm so happy that you feel the emotion I tried to express. I'll ...

Thank you very much for suggestions, I haven't even thought about describing the old man, but now I thing it would be a really good idea :) I know what ...

Thanks for the review, it's really helpful and I appreciate your sincerity. Picked up some literature in English for the summer to work on my eloquence. Cheers