FourLeafClover

Thank you for the review! I'll make sure to fix my transitions and the sentence.

Thank you for the review! Yeah, I wasn't really sure how to make Vic react to that, so I was like "Well shoot, let's just see what happens I guess," ...

Thank you!

Thanks! And you don't have to if you don't want to, so if you don't want to or don't have time to, I'm not going to force you to read ...

Thank you for the review! Yeah, looking back on it, I definitely dumped WAY too much info at first. You're right, I definitely should have tried to do better with ...

Thank you so much for the review! Vic is the daughter of Hephaestus, so kinda-ish. Thank you, I'm glad you like Vic and the dialogue! And yeah, I always view ...

They're currently in Vic's hut right outside the Underworld (their world revolves around Greek mythology). Yeah, looking back on it, I did really poorly with describing the characters and the ...

SHOOT I forgot the rating stuff and to put it in the appropriate folder. Dang it! Sorry!

*Anyway

I definitely won't be "their next big star" because I don't know what I'm doing that well, but thank you for the compliment anywya!

Thank you for the review! And I did email her the link, and she did like it, which makes me really happy.

Okay, thanks!

Oooh, that sound awesome!

This is really good! The grammar super good and the story is very interesting. It also leaves me wanting to know more! There are some parts where new paragraphs or ...