Fountainquill

Comments in bold :) black holes burnt cigarette stains in the dark, enveloped the planets like a glutton and his lunch, ate it up and swept through the null gravity ...

Hi and welcome to YWS :D Okay, I'm going to get right into this then. First off, I echo Earthfire's question: why is she held captive by the forest? That ...

Comments in bold. I just kind of started writing and this is what happened, I think it needs a little more of something but I’m not sure what. Some help ...

Just so you know, I haven't read Barker, so if any of my comments imply confusion because of that, I'm sorry. All rightey, let's get started! :) Comments in bold. ...

Just let me say - wow. I agree with the two comments above me, but I thought it pointless to just post the same thing, so I'm going to be ...

Hiya! Comments in bold :) The art of escaping reality is something that is considered by many people impossible. Truly, it is, in fact, impossible Too many commas in this ...