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Re: Fight Like Hell
Hi! I'm partially new to reviewing so sorry if this isn't up to par with what it should be. There was mainly one grammatical error that I found- "Trying to ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: Endless Nightmare
Hi! I'm kind of new to reviewing, so sorry if this isn't up to caliber with anything else. I really enjoyed this poem! It has a great use of the ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: Blood Red Roses
Oh My. I absolutely loved this! The amount of imagery was astonishing, and overall, it was just a great story! This might seem a little overkill, but have you thought ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The Monster Under My Bed
I really enjoyed reading this! The imagery was amazing, as I could invision it all completely in my head! The grammar was off in a couple of places, but it ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Potatoe Fanfic (2BeeContinued)
Um... That was the weirdest thing I have ever read. Have you heard of Fanfiction.net? I think you would be perfect there with all the third grade girls writing exactly ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Waffle's Old Stories
It's really good for a person to look back on their past work and either critique it themselves or get someone to do it for them. A couple of these ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Band Instrument Studies
This was utterly hilarious! The fight between the trumpets and the clarinets throughout all of it really represents the instruments well. Except for the saxophone part, I have no idea ...
Nov 29, 2015
