Formslipper

I read it, and good job! I saw Chapter Nine posted, but didn't want to start with Chapter Nine, so I'll start here. First impression: lukewarm. In other words, the ...

Oh, the intensity with which my hatred burns, If only it’d (what?) light you on fire – I’d watch with glee Flames consuming your dreaded self (the flames consume math's ...

I read it, and was stunned by how well I was able to keep my attention. The usual "mysterious" works on this site tend to be cheesy and random, but ...

I read it. And it was good- very good. I hope to reach your calibre of prose someday, or even surpass it. Everything flowed well, and seemed to pull me ...

I read it. All was well and good throughout the whole thing, and it was nice to read a steady, maturely-written piece. From writing, I've realized that readers- no matter ...

I read it. Wow, I read it. It was really great, dude (or dudette), simply because of the genius character and your supreme intelligence/vocabulary. However, at times, I found this ...

I thought this was entertaining and deep. The imagery in it was apparent, as were the messages the imagery contained. A flame too bright for me to see, It lights ...

Hey there, whoever posted this! Nice job; great connection! Listen up, though. I love the Lord with my whole being, and I love to proclaim his salvation, but I strongly ...

I read it. These sods are wrong in thinking this is creepy. All being said, it was amazing and heartfelt, so much beyond the petty writing that is prevalent on ...

I read it because 1.1 was very good. This, of course, matched 1.1, if not surpassed it. I don't have much else to say, except it seems that you're a ...

I read it. Everything seemed to work smoothly, pace-wise and development-wise. However, the setting is very fishy to the reader. Everything is a mystery, because you didn't take the time ...

I read it. To be honest, I don't think I'd be allowed by my parents to read this... maybe I'm sheltered or something, lol. In other words, this contained a ...

I read it. Your prose is superb! Not gonna lie, though, this felt a lot like a preface. A preface, by definition, is "an introduction to a book, typically stating ...

I read it. And, it's awesome, because I'm starting to realize the organization you have. Each chapter conveys a distinct and important message. In this segment, it seems like Vivian ...

I read it. Actually, I don't have much time because I'm away from my computer and using my Dad's iPad, so my response won't be as up to par as ...