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i can't say much but i like the way you think. keep making this journal of yours, it deserves continuation... after reading this, i thought you have interesting viewpoint and ...

hi! i hate to be a party pooper here since all the comments we're so nice and everyone seems to really like it, but i have issues with this one. ...

hey! see, i read the whole chapters and parts in one sitting, means you caught me right where you want your readers be, and i'm staying! mainly because you poured ...

ahh, very good story! i had seen your title a few times but i just browse away from it, probably because of the title itself, it kind of reminds me ...

yep, this is definitely one cute piece of story... i don't think the next part would top this one,, or that's just how i think... at least. your descriptions are ...

well i can tell you one thing AnNguyenLe, this is definitely one rough section of it... :wink: so the characters are Vietnamese? cool! i like that, it's different. but their ...

you've over sold your story this time Ikafe, sorry to say this, but if you keep pulling us to feel the suspense you want us to feel, it's not gonna ...

i know i'm not the best critique out there when it comes to technical problems nor am a major in English to say your wrong in this or that, i ...

hey there! thought i would return the favor by searching and reviewing your work so here it is! :D the whole story left me hanging for more details into it... ...

i dig any story about angels! i like this one! just hope the next part would be longer, :D keep it interesting and mysterious as you go on with the ...

hey,, so it's a short story, no wonder the last part was quick,, that's cool though, i just find this part okay, unlike your 1st part, where there's much going ...

:lol: i like the comedy on your story comrie.Your title definitely manage to stand out from all the other new stories... i like the humor in it, it was like ...

yup! i like how you describe everything around the story... you're a good writer, how bout that? :lol: ... though the story is a bit cliche(break ups), you made a ...

:shock: wuw! that was intense! i like how the flow of the story goes, and how dark it is... i got hooked on the first paragraph making me read the ...

definitely a good start, though sometimes i found my self re-reading some parts either because i got confused all of a sudden or my mind's flying off somewhere,, though its ...