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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: Apocalypse

    Hey! Forever here with a short review!! This was certainly a very interesting story here. I really liked the little scene that you presented us with. Into the review now. ...

    Mar 31, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Moving - Beware of the Light Chapter 4 (Draft)

    Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! Well, this chapter was a bit verbose at different places. Other than that, I think we have another unexpected incident here. This incident ...

    Mar 31, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Resurrection: A Tale of Brave Football

    Hey! Forever here with a review! Title First and foremost, I really wonder about the title of the piece. If I am not very mistaken, we are talking about a ...

    Mar 31, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Romantic Re: The Dance - Beware of the Light Chapter 3 (Draft)

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Despite the foreshadowing done in the very first chapter, I really wasn't expecting this to happen. I didn't even imagine that Mr. Sancho is ...

    Mar 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: At The Zoo - Beware of the Light Chapter 2 (Draft)

    Hey! Forever here with a short review!! This was relatively a calm and cool chapter. I really liked the use of present tense to denote whatever is happening in the ...

    Mar 30, 2022
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Positive.

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a very cute story. I really liked how you found hope amidst hopelessness in the covid situation. I found the emotions it ...

    Mar 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, General Re: Meet John Linton - Beware of the Light Chapter 1 (Draft)

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Overall impression This was quite an exciting one. We got to see a scene completely different from that of the prologue, in terms of ...

    Mar 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Beware of the Light (Prologue)

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was certainly a very interesting prologue to a novel. I liked how you maintained a certain amount of vagueness about the character, plot ...

    Mar 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 12: Meet the Elite

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Characters Yuki can sti be called that 'normal' person. To me, these people do not appear to be normal but rather crazy to some ...

    Mar 28, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The town of Richardson-part two

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Just as a quick note, this is too long to review, so I am going to review a part of it(upto chapter 10). I ...

    Mar 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Nightingale And Foxglove

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Wow, this was a beautiful poem. I really liked how this poem can be interpreted in different levels. Let's get into the review now ...

    Mar 26, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 11: The Joy

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! I really expected the battle to end then and there but seems like it didn't happen. But yes, the battle was quite interesting. It ...

    Mar 26, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: LoaMR: Ch.XVI: Daphne and Claire 14

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well I don't have a lot to say about this part. Time, indeed passed very quickly for Claire. I liked how she chose not ...

    Mar 25, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Jennifer-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies.

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a completely known origin story. I did deduce that Jennifer is kind of going to be like this and true from her ...

    Mar 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Generational Trauma

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! At a first read, I thought the poem was quite good. I really liked how you used present tense to depict various stages of ...

    Mar 23, 2022


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