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Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Violence get lost! XD. I am quite used to read 16+ works(I have read many works reated 18+) So, let's get right into it. ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review. Before the review, I just want to tell you that I am missing points in one part and then I remember that in the ...

Hey Mailice! Forever here with a review! This chapter actually makes Claire a more important character than I thought. It was quite good to see the whole thing from a ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! A lot of fortunate things happening in this part. First of all, these two girls got rid of the police and that also without ...

Hey Mailice! Forever back here with a short review! This chapter actually made Leonard look as a criminal in the eyes of many, at least the villagers will be more ...

Hey! Forever here with a short review!! There were many lakes in this former country This line actually makes me wonder a lot about this particular place, especially the word ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! While Emma played a board game with her grandfather in the evening, she almost didn't think about the fact that her departure was in ...

Hey!! Forever here with a short review!! It was quite a good read. I found it quite a great description of the town. Here the story took a turn and ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! She turned around so fast that her neck made a cracking sounds. There is one extra s in sound. Harry, I find it hard ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a short review!! First of all, welcome to YWS! Hope you have a great time here :) Now to the story itself. I should just tell ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This part is a lot better than the last chapter in near about all the terms. Martha is a true friend of Emma. I ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review! This beginning of this chapter was a bit confusing. I think it's better to talk about Claire a little earlier. That can make the ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Just then Friedrich asked from above who was standing at the door. I would rewrite this line to make this a bit clearer. As ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! This was quite an intriguing chapter and I wonder how I missed the details in the previous chapter. Definitely a problem on the side ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! I just had a question: Is the story in third person omniscient? In the previous three parts, it seemed like it was third person ...