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Hey! Forever here with a review!! Natalie was an only child and had a Mom and Dad. I guess it's better to write it as the only child of Mom ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!! I wonder why they decided to tell the whole camp about their discovery. At least, if I think from Aria's side, shw should ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This was quite a good poem. Let's get right into it. a certain number of months circling round a certain individual year. "Certain individual ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review! First of all, I think that you should replace the ocean with the sea. In the beginning, there are three oceans. Convert all ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review! There were slowly getting used to the longer shift and things were starting to fall back into somewhat of a rhythm after the chaos ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! First of all I would like to say that you have done a great job decreasing the word count and length of the chapters. ...

Hey!! Forever with a review!! I wonder about the connection between Claire and the mosaic. Seems like there is a connection between them, you highlighted it in the another chapter ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a short review! I wonder about the relation between this Albert and Leonard. History can be a connection between them because Albert is a historian and ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting part. Leonard is definitely a person who people can't understand in a very clear manner. Something which I wonder about ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! First of all, I love your titles. They are very very appropriate for the stories you write. Here the missed train can be seen ...

Hey! Forever here with very short review! First of all with the title. The title seems to be quite appropriate for the piece. It shows that few people can make ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This part was very interesting. First of all, it showed the kind-heartedness(I am not really sure if they have a heart but still) of ...

Heyy!!Forever here with a review! First and foremost, something which I wonder about is if these parts can be developed into individual chapters. There is no rule about the word ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Now I have skipped the past two parts as you might havs noticed. In summary, those parts were info dumping. I don't know the ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting part and the pace of your story seems to have been slowed down. I liked it. It's always fun when ...