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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Hitman

    This story is so captivating but it would have been nice to know the motive of why J.J's uncle wanted to have her and her family killed. It also woud ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Broken English

    I wish this story had been a longer. I liked the details and the way everything seemed to flow together. What also could have helped visualizing this story is maybe ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Voices

    Fix your smile it looks too fake {I feel this line was directed to people who put on a mask to hide their true feelings} Hide your scars they tell ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Story Of My Life

    What I like about this poem is how it it is organized with the stanzas, and the way it flows together. There is so much power in the word "Tomorrow" ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Dream Girl

    OMG, I could not be distracted from my laptop. I loved the whole thing! What I disliked was the cliff hanger :o hopefully you write what happens next :) The ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Her Laugh

    Although this poem is 3 lines, I like the connection I feel by the time I'm done reading. It makes me wonder about the people I see everyday who always ...

    Dec 8, 2013


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