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Re: A Hitman
This story is so captivating but it would have been nice to know the motive of why J.J's uncle wanted to have her and her family killed. It also woud ...
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Re: Broken English
I wish this story had been a longer. I liked the details and the way everything seemed to flow together. What also could have helped visualizing this story is maybe ...
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Re: Voices
Fix your smile it looks too fake {I feel this line was directed to people who put on a mask to hide their true feelings} Hide your scars they tell ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: Story Of My Life
What I like about this poem is how it it is organized with the stanzas, and the way it flows together. There is so much power in the word "Tomorrow" ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: Dream Girl
OMG, I could not be distracted from my laptop. I loved the whole thing! What I disliked was the cliff hanger :o hopefully you write what happens next :) The ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: Her Laugh
Although this poem is 3 lines, I like the connection I feel by the time I'm done reading. It makes me wonder about the people I see everyday who always ...
Dec 8, 2013
