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Ohmygosh Biffle!!! This made me freakin' cry! Its so touching, and I know Lucy's condition, this is so awesome, I'm sure Lucy PennyKettle appreciates it. :elephant:

Hey chaos, I'll be your reviewer for today! have you ever sat out on a balcony or in a tree and gazed out at the beauty of the world and ...

Hi tigress! I'll be your reviewer for today! And, as I’m sure many teenage girls (and perhaps jewelry store employees) will be ‘happy’ to learn that there are Edward Cullen-type ...

Hi! I'll be your reviewer for today! Well seriously, I couldn't find anything to correct! It is an intro, and I can tell that much. Maybe you want to add ...

Hi! I'll be your reviewer for today. They were fighting again. Yelling, screaming, throwing words at each other until their throats were hoarse and dry. Great beginning. I was hooked. ...

This was awesome Eddie! You are officially my poet idol! this is m favorite part! Translucent stairways form and crumble with each passing step. I just think that is so ...

This was great, maybe you should do some stuff like what the others said, oooh you should send this to someone famous, just a suggestion, it would be pretty cool. ...

Hi! I'll be your reviewer for today! Let us talk about people’s dreams, shall we? Great hook. Everyone has a dream of some kind, an aspiration if you will. You ...

Hi! I'll review this for you! Confucianism placed their footprint on China during the times of the Qin dynasty, and along with it, this religion has stunted the growth of ...

Wow! Kamas! That is awesome! I love it! I didn't see any mistakes and it was truly awesome! You don't need to change the title! It fits it great, you ...

Hey Jon! I'll be your revewier for today! I didn't see anything wrong with this poem, and truly, that made me mad! Anyways, great job. I really liked this. I ...

Hi! I'll be your reviewer for today! the mills used to cough and stutter all day long Great description here, I like it! Once upon a time tall, blackened chimneys ...

Hi! I'll be your reviewer for today! "Your such a whore" It should be: "You're such a whore" "It'll be ok dear". Should be "It'll be okay dear". and why ...

Hi! I shall be your reviewer for today! “OK,” no. Don't ever do that. Always use "okay" it bugs me the other way. Lilica has stunning, straight blond hair and ...

Hi Cassie! I'll be your reviewer for today! "Why are you oging that way?" This was the only mistake I found. "oging" should be "going" but I think that was ...