Flux

Oh, I feel so conceited! you've read my stories but I haven't done the same to yours! I'm a little tight for time, so I'll finish it and review more ...

A few minor spelling mistakes "could hear anything coming from the other rooms in our house." You must mean couldn't , am I right? "Nothing but power poles, large pine ...

Hey! Fan of Naruto XD Just a few minor mistakes i picked up, but I'm not really good a picking through someone's work for every single gramatical error. Trying to ...

Yeah, it may not count as poetry, but I totally agree with you! I had just gotten into Twilight before the whol kafuffle about the movie and yada-yada-yada.... Yeah, Breaking ...

As he unscrewed his watery eyes, out of the very edge of his vision, caught the glimpse of a family picture, hanging on a portrait I just don't get this ...

It was... short. Fairly descriptive. Maybe it could be a bit longer... and a bit more descriptive... but who I am to say all this. I'm not that great at ...

Since I'm still just a beginner with writing and such, I'd have to say that it was quite descriptive. Yes, I think it could be even more descriptive... but still, ...

Look, I am not a poet. My poetry is wretched. I could try something for ya, but I'd rather spare you. I really have no idea of what I could ...