Flower~Child

I like this, I don't quite understand it but I like it. I don't get the point of it being red, wouldn't it be better in black or something like ...

Ok I am going to go piece by piece on this one. Or at least try to. First Part. I like this, and I like how it goes down to ...

Ok review time. First of all I love this. It is a really good idea for a story, but whose parent's are like that? (Anyway just going to go through ...

Review time! Ok here we go. *** Chapter 1- A Lovely Nightmare Daniel swept in from behind and wrapped his arms around my waist.  I jumped, but he seemed highly ...

Ok, well to be honest all of the words being mixed up annoys me. I really have to look at some of the words to understand them. I do like ...

Ok, review time. I don't know how good this will be, but here we go. I read through it and wondered what you meant by this poem. I gave it ...

Um, ok, wow. I don't think I could review this as poetry, but I will try. First of all there is no punctuation. There needs to be some in the ...

Ok, so I so totally went back and read this again and I get it. So yeah some people don't know pain like others do and they take it way ...

Ok I so reviewed this before and it didn't post. Anyway the only thing that I see that is wrong with this poem is the line that says, It's funny ...

Ok, review time. First of all it keeps rhyme at times, and then it leaves. I like the last two lines of this poem the best. I don't think that ...

Ok this won't be much of a review, but here I go. Like I have said before n & symbol, it ruins it when I am reading such beautiful work. ...

Ok review time. First of all I love the rhyme sceme here. It is amazing, but like lyrical_sunshine said it does break at that one point. I don't get what ...

I am going to make this a little bit shorter on the lines and then I will review it ok. It’s so odd to think home is no longer where ...

Um OK, well first of all are you trying to get the point across that good and evil are both equal? Anyway, first of all when you said Holy Bible, ...

Ok, I disagree dude. Naruto is rated for people 13 and over depending on the episodes. If you read the manga you would see that no liitle kid needs to ...