FlowerPower

That was a really amazing poem. Honestly I would have thought a professional wrote it, and that we would study it in school. I would try and get it published. ...

hahaha I knew her name sounded familiar when it pooped into my head haha

Thanks! :))))

What would you suggest that I show more of in the story? At the end he does get fired but he doesn't tell Emily and is still going on with ...

Thanks for the review. I see what you mean by it needing to be more descriptive. I'l try and spruce it up some. If you need a review just let ...

oh to counteract how you kinda gave away the story in the last sentence you can start the story from an earlier point in time then go back to the ...

Will do :)

Thanks for the help. As you can probably tell I'm really new to writing actual stories that aren't school related. In my opinion it was pretty good but I guess ...