FlamingPhoenix

Okay fixt every thing in the prologue and chapter 1.

I will review it when I get the chance. But I will review it.

Sure I was whiting for your next chapter to be posted on the site. Thank you so much for giving me the link.

Sure here is the link and you don't have to review it if you don't want to but here is the link anyway. I hope you like it. :D

Your welcome! :D Oh and if you have any work that you would love to be reviewed you can just ask me and I will review it for you. :D

Thank you. And if you want I will let you no when chapter 2 is posted on the site.

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thank you so much, and again I'm so sorry this review took so long. but I will review your next chapter and a lot quicker to. I hope you have ...

Thank you so much for you great review, and I will let you no when my next chapter is out I'm sure you will love it like you did with ...

Thank you so much for your great review I will fix every thing when I get the chance and I hope you have a great day/night too! :D

Thank you so much! :D See you soon.

Hi, Moon I'm sorry but I'm not going to change any thing in my chapter because if I do you will never get to no the characters well enough sorry. ...

Okay good. I'm really looking for word to reading it.

Oh that is okay. :D I can way for your next chapter to be posted on the site. I wish you luck. just don't stop the story now it was ...

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