Firestar

"Peter and the Starcatchers" by Dave Barry, "Gregor the Overlander" by Suzanne Collins, "The Merchant of Death" by D. J. MacHale, "Uglies" by Scott Westerfeld, anything by Margaret Peterson Haddix, ...

Sure, and I bet you never derive anything from any other book. :roll: "Eragon" just has more similarities to other books than usual.

Very good!!! I'll put in some punctuation and rhythm problems. Most hearts are red, But mine is blue, Probably cause, it misses you. That halo on your head, Must have ...

Very interesting!!! I really liked how it flowed along. I'm not really a person who picks the story apart, piece by piece, so I'll just show you one part that ...

Interesting short poem. What I spotted right off the bat was the second line. It should be "You reveal our darkest nightmares." I think everyone else got the rest of ...

It actually sounds like more of a song to me. Right now I'll add some punctuation marks. WALKED AWAY You said you loved me, But did you really care? You ...

I'll just start by adding some punctuation marks and grammar. Life in your absence, is but a hazy passing. Days leave amiss, and the pain is long-lasting. The breath is ...

The truth, at any degree, Whether fact or confession, is the one way to be free. Free from the past, And that which binds, too, your life of shadow and ...

Hey J! Answer 1. I found this story very intriguing! Answer 2. I found it understandable. But that may be just because you told me what was going on. Answer ...