Firepower13

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OOPs double post. :(

Yup, most of what you pointed out are valid issues, but they were done on purpose. I figured a poem narrated by a nutjob would be more clunky and disjointed. ...

Thanks for reviewing, and I'm really happy you liked it!

:) :D :) :D Thank you for reviewing and for being awesome! I'm super happy that you liked the poem! :)

Sorry if it feels out of context or weird, the relationship is that the narrator is in an abusive and manipulative relationship with the person they are talking to. The ...

Thanks for reviewing, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you! The sense of the 'blame' lines was meant more to convey that the narrator was struggling with their emotions and trying to decide whether to be angry or ...

Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I often wonder what is happening in the heads of the crazy clingy people in some of those movies and this is meant to reflect that. ...

Thank you for reviewing! I'm sorry that you have had such a bad personal experience, and I hope you're better now.

Hi! Thanks for the review- it was meant to be somewhat disturbing, to be honest. I haven't written many horror poems, and this was meant to be a bit of ...

Nice! I especially like the rhyming of 'poetic' and 'pathetic'. Not much else to review, but it was hilarious.

What? No, you didn't offend me.

People, bow down to an excellent example of writer's block.

Oh. XD

Thank you! Hey, maybe you should write your own Christmas poem!