FireandIce326

Hola! I thought this was pretty well done :) . I aree with one of the people above talking about breaking it up into smaller lines adn such. Other than ...

I deffinatly like this. I agree with the others that I could imagine the picture. I also like the formating and how it is centered, something differant I don't see ...

I liked this :D And yes this is based off of a very well know poem lol. Well that doesnt matter, you made it your own! Just because someone made ...

Ok, so this is pretty good. Who said death isnt an angel? Higher than the others, an archangel? ik someone said it before, but it is bugging me as well. ...

As far as writting, I like it! Unfortuantly, as far as poetry, well its not the best. But dont worry! I think this has much potential! You wrote it is ...

Wow... I have to say, I really like this! :D ... You say you haven't written before? If you had not of said that I would not have guessed that! ...